Comments to Beginnings

 
On a scale from nothing to lots, how would you rate the story?
interesting, i liked it :)
Would you read a sequel to this?
i really enjoyed the world that was being created in this story. for all the horror and sadness of the lost earth, the post apocalyptic "promise" offers great hope... would have loved to see more story :)
Would you read a sequel to this?
ah..love, sweet love^^ love the chapter! i think this deserve a sequel, it seem a pity not to continue with this
Would you read a sequel to this?
Yes, it'll be nice to read a J/S with no angst. Sequel please.
Was it worth the time it took to read?
This was very much worth reading. I would love to see a sequel or even a series. I love the name for the baby.
Was it too long?
Hi! No it wasn't too long... I like to hink it was the perfect height... I really like your story and the line of your story (sorry I 'm french it might be a little confuse) death be damned life will continue... I really like it. Hope to read more of your stuff. Congratulation :) Moune a french reader
So, how did you like it?
Five minutes after reading this, I heard a bird sing. "Oh, how nice that the sprint has arrived", I thought. Then I remembered that it is late summer/early fall. Your description of the winter and the howling wind really convinced my subconscious...
Was it too obviously written by a foreigner?
You should be ashamed of yourself, no one should have this much talent. I've read it 3 times already and I want to read it again.
So, how did you like it?
I just wanted to say that i have read a few fics about the AU Sam carter but it was good to finally see the other side of her reality where we can see what happens. not just imagine what could have. anyway i thought it was great :)
Would you read a sequel to this?
Liked this very much. I like the way you write. I got up at 5.30am just to read this as I didn't have time last night. Could be an indication of how much I wanted to read it before I went to work today :-) The small changes in the characters worked too. Maybe WHEN(yeah I'd really like a sequel!) you do a follow up you can get Carters hair cut, for me long hair and Carter don't go together!
Would you read a sequel to this?
Fantastic story! Yes, I would read a sequel to this story. Thank you for writing!!
Was it sexy enough for you?
Another nice pairing of the Alternate Earth Sam/Janet. Good technical/environmental issues, they were developed very well. I would have liked it more sexy but I really liked the payoff with Cassandra, so it was fine as it is. Thanks,
Would you read a sequel to this?
yes i would I think there is alot more to tell about this reality
Would you read a sequel to this?
Oh wow. That was really nice. I'm glad you wrote a sequel to Shifting Views. And I would most certainly read a sequel to this story if you were to write it.
Was it too obviously written by a foreigner?
Once again you have written another wonderful Janet/Sam story. You're an amazing writer of the couple and I hope you never lose that desire to keep them going.
Was it worth the time it took to read?
YES. I DON'T USUALLY READ FEMSLASH BUT THIS WAS WELL-WRITTEN & ORIGINAL. thanks
 

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