Comments to Seducing An Athosian

Was it too short?

u should show Vala shagging Sam

Was it sexy enough for you?

*nosebleed* err...yeah..maybe a bit too much..but i got some good laugh and some images to keep me warm^^

Was it worth the time it took to read?

Hell yes it was worth the time to read - all four times that I read it.

Was it too obviously written by a foreigner?

No, it was not obvious that this was written by a foreigner. There was a few gramatical mistakes but anyone could have made them. Plus, humor is one of the hardest things to translate into another language, and I found myself actually laughing out loud at parts of this story.

Would you read a sequel to this?

Absolutely!

On a scale from nothing to lots, how would you rate the story?

This is not a pairing that I would have thought off but it actually worked. It is a nice suprise to read a story which was well written, please do not stop writing or my brain will implode with all the baddly written fiction.

Was it worth the time it took to read?

Oh yes it was. Very funny, especially loved Sam's revulsion of Daniel with Rodney. Soundproofed walls, hehe.

So, how did you like it?

That was excellent--I mean, yeah, sexy, but very, very humorous. Poor Vala...sort of. and that last line was a classic. I'll have to remember that.