Comments to Cockpit Tales: Blake's Story

So, how did you like it?

Good. It made we kinda wet.

Was it worth the time it took to read?

great,i need much more erotic stories if u can plz jimmy

Was it too long?

Calle Dybedahl: Your story is fascinating.. No, not too long, not to short. Just Perfect!!! I live with some r00mates that would seem as if they are the characters in your story. Everything sounds the same. You, know, like the viles, the potatoe chips, the vinegar, the rough sex, ect, ect. I seem to be ok with all of that, except if my roomate had not been doing all this with My Girlfriend. I realized it after it had been going on for a while. (2 years). The way I realized there was something going on is by setting a tape recorder in my room. I could hear him tell her to "blow it hot" and then there would be an audible "popping" sound. That has intrigued me more that them having sex. I have asked them both and they pretend to have no clue of what I am talking about, even after hearing the audio clip.. All I have been seeking is to know what all this is about. I just want to hear it in simple words, because I get lost when everyone uses symbolism or something like insinuations. Could you tell me what you are really talking about? I would really appreciate this as it would put a great sense of relief on my poor head and broken heart. Thank You. Was that too long?

Was it too obviously written by a foreigner?

Heh. I can see this is an early one:). I don't think it was too obviously written by a foreigner, but "pants" and other Americanisms were obvious, as well as some typos. And I think you've captured corny porn-mag-style storytelling in Blake's story quite well. I laughed out loud at "mammaries" and rest of the way through:). BTW, the formatting with the quote marks looks a bit buggered on this layout.

So, how did you like it?

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