Comments to Sex and Violence

Would you read a sequel to this?

Hell yes! I've just read the whole series in less than two hours flat and loved every second of it.

Would you read a sequel to this?

Yes!

Was it sexy enough for you?

Nope but I'm used to more in depth scenes in Black Lace novels

Was it sexy enough for you?

I thoroughly enjoy this fanfic. The blending of characters from the multiple programs is creative, innovative, and very interesting. Even better is the clever and compelling plot line. Excellent work. I find myself wishing for additional chapters/installments, and waiting to see what happens next. I hope more will be forthcoming relatively soon?

So, how did you like it?

Awesome! Fun! I just finished the series, and my feedback is ... MORE PLEASE!!! I was initially concerned that not being familar with all of the the various fictions would make the story hard to follow. While I am sure there was much that I 'missed' for not knowing the story lines, your line stands on it's own. Stand very well, too! Thank you for sharing. Please share more soon.

Was it too obviously written by a foreigner?

There are a couple mistakes I've noticed you making consistently. Little things. One is that titles (like Miss, Mr., Mrs., etc) are always capitalized. Another is that when someone is talking about him/herself and someone else, the other person is always put first. That is, you'd never say "I and Sara are...", it would always be "Sara and I..." If you want the character to be speaking ungrammatically, they may begin a sentence by saying "Me and Sara...", but for whatever reason, no one ever starts with "I and". Otherwise, your English is flawless...and highly erotic. Great stories. :)