Comments to Understanding

Was it too obviously written by a foreigner?

the story suck

On a scale from nothing to lots, how would you rate the story?

7 or 8, but an Illyria/Fred pairing might have made for an interesting addition to the story.

On a scale from nothing to lots, how would you rate the story?

Lots. ...especially lovely image of Kate. will most definately be taking that away with me *g*